On you Flickr account I can see one image wich concerns the audience evaluation (question 3) and two images about forms and conventions (question 1). You need to use the Flickr-to-blog function to get these on to your blog, properly titled and labelled. Where is your answer to question four?
In terms of your answers to one and three, I have the following comments.
1. A good start but needs more development. For example you could explore the issues around the final girl further, or the idea of the return of the past which your narrative deals with.
3. This answer is very brief and underdeveloped. You need to begin by explaining who your TA is, then explain how you got your feedback, then look at positives and negatives, sorted out into a decent order, and finally explain what you would like to improve on, based on your audience feedback, if you had time.
On you Flickr account I can see one image wich concerns the audience evaluation (question 3) and two images about forms and conventions (question 1). You need to use the Flickr-to-blog function to get these on to your blog, properly titled and labelled. Where is your answer to question four?
ReplyDeleteIn terms of your answers to one and three, I have the following comments.
1. A good start but needs more development. For example you could explore the issues around the final girl further, or the idea of the return of the past which your narrative deals with.
3. This answer is very brief and underdeveloped. You need to begin by explaining who your TA is, then explain how you got your feedback, then look at positives and negatives, sorted out into a decent order, and finally explain what you would like to improve on, based on your audience feedback, if you had time.